Multicultural America Project - 2015

Multicultural America Project - 2015 

 https://sites.google.com/a/sas.edu.sg/radhika-s-multicultural-america-project/

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  1. Anonymous8 October 2015 at 18:34

    I thought your interview with your Grandfather was good. I could understand the both of you clearly but the one thing I would have done differently would be more involved your gandfather as in he was talking a lot while you were doing one word sentences and not adding on to wht he was saying.

    Your paragraphs were great. I enjoyed reading how your grandpa only had a slate and Text Book while you have much more. I also enjoyed your description of different worlds to describe a TCK life to a normal life.

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  2. Anonymous8 October 2015 at 18:41

    Your Reflection was spot on. You had smooth pace and voice along with good descripters and Reflecting. I would have put a image into the video of your grandfather or blog in there so it could be a little more of a video and less of a podcast.

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  3. Anonymous8 October 2015 at 18:42

    You did really well. I think your information was really in depth and you had written with a lot of information and description. Also, your interview was really great. I don't think you could have done anything better.

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